The story eleven is about a girl named Rachel and it’s her birthday. You may think she’s happy but she’s not. She is eleven but wishes she were one-hundred-and two years old. Why she wants to be that age we don’t know. She’s sad because all the years inside her ten, nine, eight, seven, six, five, four, three, two, and one can come all out. Like if you need a hug that’s the part of you that’s two.
So she’s sad and in math things get worse her math teacher asks whose sweater was in the closet for a month nobody claimed the ugly red sweater that was like a jump rope. Then she plops it by her desk she said she saw Rachel wear it once. Rachel stuttered not not mine. Of course it is.
Nutter, Anyah
3/3/09
Becky essay
This story is about a girl named Becky. She wants a bike but doesn’t get it until the end of the story.Becky is a credible character because she does all the things a kid would do. And she gets avoided by the Wheels and Break Boys. &nProxy-Connection: keep-alive Cache-Control: max-age=0 p; Becky is belivable because she wants to fit in the other kids. For example, Becky thinks, “I only want to be with Nat, Aldo, Jimmy, and Ben.” They have bikes, and she wants one too, so she can ride and play with them. This proves that Becky is credible.
Another reason Becky is credible is because she fights with her friend. Shirnette wanted to get back at Becky for making her pet centipede crawl up her shirt. So she got her back by putting a cockaroach in%Proxy-Connection: keep-alive Cache-Control: max-age=0 Becky’s blouse. That was the first fight they had. So they got really upset at each other.
These are the reasons why Becky is a credible character. So in this case Becky is a normal child
I'm good at sports.
I feel like I'm king.
I would be devistated.
chapter 2
That he wasn't allowed to draw,and he had a bad foot.
But that will change because he'll be chosen to be a artist so he won't have to use his foot.
one important thing is he found out what was wrong with the wolf and he heard screaming
chapter 3
1. They learned to hunt together.
2. He decided to hunt alone with ram.
3.If I were volt I would be furious. How could you betray your own tribe. Saying that we should hunt with demon dogs.If you want to hunt with dogs go with the mountain people . Once you set foot in their land they'll kill you.
chapter four
1.I think Tao's mother is a good person who never gives up. She would always be in a good mood.And when they tried to take her child away she fought like a cave lion."She made many things from the earth and waters". "She made necklaces from ivory and antlers."
chapter 6
1.The two taboos he breaks are him hunting with a wolf and him drawing.
2.He doesn't know about him drawing.
3.He's acknoledging the good side of him when he's not thinking of demons.
chapter 5
1.He tries to draw a horse and a wolf.
2.The wolf is easier because he needs the picture right in front of him.
chapter 7
1. Yes I do agree with Graybeard in those times, because we break taboos all the time. Like gang signs hate symbols and grafiti
chapter 8
1. Say a spy wants to own a dance school so what if it doesn't reach expectations because it reaches his expectations and makes him happy.
chapter 9
1. I think he changed his mind because he can tell Tao is a good image maker.
2. From his decision I think he sees the good things in others and is a modest and uplifting to others.
chapter 10
1. The mountains that walk are mammoths.
2. Tao almost got trampled.
chapter 11
1. Yes I would like to be taught by him.
2. Yes because he would teach me well.
chapter 12
1. He needs animal fat, oil,blood,eggs, and honey. blood.%3
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Nutter, Anyah
2/26/09
Period 2/3
Eleven
The story eleven is about a girl named Rachel and it’s her birthday. You may think she’s happy but she’s not. She is eleven but wishes she were one-hundred-and two years old. Why she wants to be that age we don’t know. She’s sad because all the years inside her ten, nine, eight, seven, six, five, four, three, two, and one can come all out. Like if you need a hug that’s the part of you that’s two.
So she’s sad and in math things get worse her math teacher asks whose sweater was in the closet for a month nobody claimed the ugly red sweater that was like a jump rope. Then she plops it by her desk she said she saw Rachel wear it once. Rachel stuttered not not mine. Of course it is.
Nutter, Anyah
3/3/09
Becky essay
This story is about a girl named Becky. She wants a bike but doesn’t get it until the end of the story.Becky is a credible character because she does all the things a kid would do. And she gets avoided by the Wheels and Break Boys. &nProxy-Connection: keep-alive Cache-Control: max-age=0 p; Becky is belivable because she wants to fit in the other kids. For example, Becky thinks, “I only want to be with Nat, Aldo, Jimmy, and Ben.” They have bikes, and she wants one too, so she can ride and play with them. This proves that Becky is credible.
Another reason Becky is credible is because she fights with her friend. Shirnette wanted to get back at Becky for making her pet centipede crawl up her shirt. So she got her back by putting a cockaroach in%Proxy-Connection: keep-alive Cache-Control: max-age=0 Becky’s blouse. That was the first fight they had. So they got really upset at each other.
These are the reasons why Becky is a credible character. So in this case Becky is a normal child
I'm good at sports.
I feel like I'm king.
I would be devistated.
chapter 2
That he wasn't allowed to draw,and he had a bad foot.
But that will change because he'll be chosen to be a artist so he won't have to use his foot.
one important thing is he found out what was wrong with the wolf and he heard screaming
chapter 3
1. They learned to hunt together.
2. He decided to hunt alone with ram.
3.If I were volt I would be furious. How could you betray your own tribe. Saying that we should hunt with demon dogs.If you want to hunt with dogs go with the mountain people . Once you set foot in their land they'll kill you.
chapter four
1.I think Tao's mother is a good person who never gives up. She would always be in a good mood.And when they tried to take her child away she fought like a cave lion."She made many things from the earth and waters". "She made necklaces from ivory and antlers."
chapter 6
1.The two taboos he breaks are him hunting with a wolf and him drawing.
2.He doesn't know about him drawing.
3.He's acknoledging the good side of him when he's not thinking of demons.
chapter 5
1.He tries to draw a horse and a wolf.
2.The wolf is easier because he needs the picture right in front of him.
chapter 7
1. Yes I do agree with Graybeard in those times, because we break taboos all the time. Like gang signs hate symbols and grafiti
chapter 8
1. Say a spy wants to own a dance school so what if it doesn't reach expectations because it reaches his expectations and makes him happy.
chapter 9
1. I think he changed his mind because he can tell Tao is a good image maker.
2. From his decision I think he sees the good things in others and is a modest and uplifting to others.
chapter 10
1. The mountains that walk are mammoths.
2. Tao almost got trampled.
chapter 11
1. Yes I would like to be taught by him.
2. Yes because he would teach me well.
chapter 12
1. He needs animal fat, oil,blood,eggs, and honey. blood.%3